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Written in response to the prompt “struggling for breath” set by the Fosseway Writers Group.
Short Story: Logic Violation
Article removed for submission to a magazine. Let’s see how that goes – I’ll keep you posted!
Written in response to the prompt “struggling for breath” set by the Fosseway Writers Group.
babbitman 
Wow. That was riveting. I was completely immersed in the story. Fabulous writing and what a tale. 🙂
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Thanks Diana! That’s some praise! Gosh 🙂
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It’s right up my alley and pulled me right in. The limited perception of the character was awesome because it could have been anything/anyone, friend or foe. The end was a mystery up to the very…end.
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A space oddysey! Or oddity?
Either way nicely executed, had a touch of Alien about it especially once the thing appeared.
Nice build up and the ending was top too.
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Thanks mate!
I think I got the original idea from watching & reading The Martian & then bits of Alien and a short story by Iain M Banks elbowed their way into things.
Again, tried to build up tension before the end twist. 😉
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Ack! Stories like this always get to me and I know this one is going to be bouncing around in my mind. Very well written and the sense of lonely tragedy got to me.
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Thanks Brenna! Hopefully, the lovely French countryside will keep nightmares away!
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Nicely done! I do love a good bit of space horror.
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Thanks Matt! I didn’t originally intend for it to go down the horror path but once I started writing it just seemed natural & obvious to go there.
Mind you, the real horror is realising what the suit has done…
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Maybe a distant relative of HAL 9000…
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Perfectly written! I love it that the writing is very neat : every word in there is placed perfectly. thrilling.
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Thanks! Glad it hit the spot 🙂
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Great story ! Love the way you express everything !
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Thanks! 🙂
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