The wonderful Susanna Leonard Hill has announced her 4th Annual Holiday Contest and again I’m approaching it as a writing exercise. This time I have a massive 350 words in which to write ‘a children’s story in which wild weather impacts the holidays’ (i.e. Christmas etc.). I’m deliberately avoiding a weather-centric story as I remember that my favourite children’s stories were almost always based around characters in a ‘situation’ which usually got out of hand. I have therefore reached for some of my own characters (in their first public story) and added a touch of snow… (somewhat rare around these parts of middle England at Christmas).
Kitten-Woolly’s Snow Adventure
Babbit pressed his cotton nose against the window, his eyes wide.
“Snow!” he whispered. The toys had never seen snow before; they had only ever known grey skies and rain at Christmas.
Alice was already outside with her daddy, making a snowman.
Pinky Bear climbed up onto the window-sill next to the cloth rabbit and looked outside. “Gosh! It’s so bright and white! Kitten-Woolly would love this,” she said.
Babbit twitched his ear. “Where is she?”
“I don’t know,” said Pinky, She’s probably lost. Again.”
Babbit peered through the glass with a frown. “I think I’ve found her. She’s in the hood of Alice’s coat!”
Sure enough, when Pinky looked closely, she could see a tiny, knitted cat bouncing inside the little girl’s hood.
Every time Alice bent down to collect snow, Kitten-Woolly slid forward into the scarf wrapped around Alice’s neck. When Alice stood up, the tiny toy plopped back into the hood.
Pinky was horrified. “What if she falls out?”
Alice was now galloping around the snowman, with the excited woolly cat jiggling up and down in the pouch behind Alice’s shoulders.
“As long as Alice doesn’t need her hood, she’ll be fine,” said Babbit.
But then it started to rain.
Alice reached back to the sides of her hood, and in one quick motion dipped forward and flicked the hood over her head. Kitten-Woolly shot across the garden, fired from the coat catapult.
Babbit’s leg stuffing gave way in shock and he fell off the window-sill.
Alice looked up and saw her cuddly kitten stuck to the snowman’s face next to the carrot.
“Kitten-Woolly! How did you get there?” she cried. She plucked the cat off the snowman with her mittened hands. “You should be inside, naughty thing.”
Alice dusted the snow off her friend and carried her back into the house, placing the kitten carefully next to Pinky before leaving to take off her boots and coat.
“Are you alright?” asked Pinky.
“Yesh” said Kitten-Woolly.
“I’m not,” came the muffled voice of Babbit from the floor. “I think, on the whole, I prefer summer.”
[348 words]
Good one! I love the image of the kitten on the snowman’s face.
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Thanks Catherine! Yes, I wanted it to be funny – kids love a bit of slapstick and prank falls. (To be honest, so do I).
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Poor Babbitt! Concerned friends are always taking the brunt of the pain. 😉
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Thanks Teresa, glad you empathized with Babbit. He’s a fine chap but sometimes his inner fibre lets him down. Literally. 😉
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Babbit’s leg stuffing gave way in shock <– I love this! lol This is such a wonderful story told in a warm and funny way, and the visuals are great.
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You’re very kind Lynn! Thanks for the comment, most appreciated. Babbit is a real soft toy in our house who started leaking stuffing some years ago, so he does have a tendency to collapse every now and then!
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Love this, especially Babbit’s line at the end. Nicely done!
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Thanks! 🙂 Glad you liked it!
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Cute story. Love the image of the kitten catapulted into the snowman’s face. Lovely word choices.
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Thanks Patricia! I wanted to mix cute characters with slightly unexpected cartoonish action – these things always made me laugh as a kid. 🙂
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Super fun characters, especially Babbit.
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Thanks Sylvia!
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Cute stuffed animal story. I like that “coat catapult.”
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Thanks Tina! 🙂
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Really like your characters. I felt drawn into the story immediately.
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Thanks Kath, glad you like my fluffy fellows!
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What a sweet, fun entry, Nick (and the end was so funny – poor Babbit :)) Very A.A. Milne! Such a cute story! Thanks so much for joining in the holiday fun! 🙂
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Thanks Susanna! High praise to be likened to the creator of Pooh & Piglet, but Milne’s work is pretty inspirational. Glad you liked it and thanks once again for all the work you do in arranging the competitions 🙂
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Great job building tension around Kitten-Wolly’s accidental adventure! 🙂
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Thanks Carrie! Glad you liked it! 🙂
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delightful, thank you
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Thanks Cecilia 🙂
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So much fun to read a story from toy’s point of view! Great slapstick comedy in here!
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Thanks Ariel! My fave stories as a kid were the unexpectedly funny ones, so I think it’s rubbed off on me 🙂
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Love your entry…the stuffed animals watching the activity outside and worrying about their compatriot…very sweet. Glad kitty was returned to the fold. 😉
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Thanks Vivian, much appreciated! 🙂
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Oh, this is funny! I can see the kitten flying from the catapult-hood and landing spread-eagle across the snowman’s face. Hilarious! Great story. Good luck in the competition!
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Thanks Jilanne, glad you liked the slapstick visuals! 😉
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Great job! Love the humor!
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Thanks! 😀
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